Moiwaka
Moiwaka
Once there was a handsome boy called
Moiwaka. He has a dog and a cat the dog’s name is Tumata, the cat’s name is Shiyan.
Moiwaka loves swimming in the ocean. One day Moiwaka went for a swim with nobody around. He said ‘ I haven’t seen anything in the ocean yet.” So he decided to swim out into the blue. He swam and swam about 200 meters away from the shore. All of a sudden, he lifted his head out of the water he realized He was in a rip. He was panicking hard out. But he
managed to get back to the shore. And that was the story of Moiwaka.
By AN
August 13th, 2008 at 3:24 am
Hi AN
I really enjoyed reading your story about Moiwaka – a very interesting character! It’s fantastic to see your class have already started blogging. I can’t wait to read more about what you have all been doing …
October 3rd, 2008 at 2:10 am
I really like the way you told us a bit about Moiwaka before you started your story – it helped me to make a connection with the character. You chose such interesting names for your characters as well. Great job AN!